Saturday, January 23, 2010

ಕನಸುಗಾರ ......




















ಕಂಡೆ ನಾ ನಿನ್ನ ಕನಸಲ್ಲಿ
ಮರುಕ್ಷಣವೇ ನಿಂತೇ ನೀ ನನ್ನ ಮನಸಲ್ಲಿ....
ಕನಸಲ್ಲೇ ಕೊನೆಯಾದೆ...
ಮನಸಲ್ಲೇ ನೆಲೆಯಾದೆ...
ಮರೆಯಲಾಗದ ನೆನಪಾದೆ
ಅಳಿಸಲಾಗದ ಚಿತ್ರವಾದೆ....

                ಕನಸು ಮನಸುಗಳ ನಡುವೆ..
                                     ಮರೆಯದೆ ನೆನಪಾಗಿ....
ಕನಸೇಕೆ ಬಿತ್ತೆಂಬ..ಮನಸ್ಸಿನ  ಪ್ರಶ್ನೆಗೆ....
ಉತ್ತರ ತಿಳಿಯದೆ...
ಕನಸು ಕಾಣುವುದನ್ನೇ ಬಿಟ್ಟಿರುವೆ....
ಆದರೇನು ಮಾಡಲಿ...
ಕಣ್ ಮುಚ್ಚಿದರೆ ನೀನೆ ಕಾಣುವೆ...
                                      ಸತ್ಯ .......

10 comments:

Vinay said...

Satya, Chennagi barediddeera. Kavanavannu Manasinaachegoo vistarisi bareyiri. Kavana nimmallo neleyaagi nillali :-)

-Vinay.

sathya...? said...

danyavaadagalu,,,vinay nimma prashamse haagu abhiprayakke,,,kanditha prayathna maduttene.....

Pradeep Rao said...

chennagide Satya.. praasa innu improve maadabahudu anta nanna anisike.. good one.

sathya...? said...

thank u pradeep ...sure i wil try..

Prajwini said...

good sir take a theme and try 2 write kavana... plz...

sathya...? said...

thank u prajju sure i wil do

geetha said...

good one, something is missing in ur kavana, it is nice but im feeling some wr it is not full antha just cross check with ur other frnds also...............

sathya...simply,,,stupid...? said...

thank u geetha,,,,ya sure,,i wil complete,,,

ashokkodlady said...

A very Good Try...and i totally agree with Pradeep and Geeta...Praasa innu uttamavaaga bahudittu...ello apurnavaagide annistu...But Nice One....idku chennagi bareyo arthathe nimmalli naanu kandirodrinda nange apurna annista ide aste....Keep on writing....Still Very Nice.....

sathya...simply,,,stupid...? said...

thanks for ur comliments and suggestions sure i wil work on it.....

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